The story feels shallow and linear so far, there is no real choice when interacting with Sophia. There was more choice in interacting with Lin. I am to believe that this is a queen of neighboring kingdoms, but she comes across like a very naieve young girl, which has not been in politics for even a minute.
I guess the main problem I have, is that it's too easy, and there is too little input. It does not hold up to the advertisement of being a "thrilling adventure where you will employ your wit, charm and cunning".
That being said, there is potential here, and I hope it grows to a fulfilling story that does hold up to the advertisement.
Little tip... remove the "almighty god" notes when you update. It brings me out of the story when suddenly the "almighty god" tells me to save, and then we continue with the story (the countdown is also a little excessive, we know how this works ^^ ).
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The story feels shallow and linear so far, there is no real choice when interacting with Sophia. There was more choice in interacting with Lin. I am to believe that this is a queen of neighboring kingdoms, but she comes across like a very naieve young girl, which has not been in politics for even a minute.
I guess the main problem I have, is that it's too easy, and there is too little input. It does not hold up to the advertisement of being a "thrilling adventure where you will employ your wit, charm and cunning".
That being said, there is potential here, and I hope it grows to a fulfilling story that does hold up to the advertisement.
Little tip... remove the "almighty god" notes when you update. It brings me out of the story when suddenly the "almighty god" tells me to save, and then we continue with the story (the countdown is also a little excessive, we know how this works ^^ ).
Good luck!
this is great